Need Feedback on New Book Description: The Children of Aphrodite

My current description for The Children of Aphrodite is:

The Children of Aphrodite is about the desecration of boys and how the fall of men led to the fall of Europe and all of Western Civilization.

I want to change it to this:

As Europe continued its campaign against men, countries had fallen apart, and people kept their mouth shut about the current state of their own nation.  In Paris, women are afraid to walk alone at night.  In Rome, it is looked down upon to show any signs of masculinity.  A growing younger generation lacks any concern for their city, their heritage, or their history.  As Europe continues to fall, driving Western Civilization out of existence, a group of grandmothers begin to recruit a new generation of boys in the hope that they will keep the last of the European countries alive, before they share the same fate as the many European countries that don’t exist anymore.

What do you think?

Redone COA Section 1 Book Cover

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The Children of Aphrodite is released in sections. Buy each section on Amazon here
(Sections 1, 2, 3, are currently released: each section is available for 99 cents):

The Children of Aphrodite, Section 1: Barcelona, Rome, Paris.

The Children of Aphrodite, Section 2: Madrid, Ljubljana, Budapest, Prague.

The Children of Aphrodite, Section 3: Paris. Biarritz. San Sebastián. Vienna. Pula. Hvar Island. Split.

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